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摘要:应对 Some people think young people are more suitable to be leaders rather than old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
应对
Some people think young people are more suitable to be leaders rather than old people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这个题目
学生写道如下一句:
I believe that elder people are more suitable to be leaders than young people with two reasons.
* be suitable to be leaders这个表达繁琐了。
* 更idiomatic的表达习惯时for two reasons。
* with (with更正为for) two reasons放在句子最后面不太好。不知道是用来修饰I believe的还是用来修饰elder people are more suitable的。因为,要么是“我的详细是出于两个原因”,要么是“年长的人更合适是出于两个原因”。
看下面
教师修改意见:
I believe that for two reasons elder people are more suited for leadership positions.
或者
For two reasons, I believe that elder people are more suited for leadership positions.
* 解决了上面的分析中的问题。
* 同时把suitable换成suited。人作为主语去适合岗位的时候,用suited更idiomatic。
* be suited for leadership positions符合“人作为主语去适合岗位”的搭配要求。
小总结:
* 状语的位置有讲究,不然意思不唯 一或者有歧义。
* 有些词汇有idiomatic的用法,靠语言经验积累。
* “适合领导角色/领导岗位”比“适合当领导”好听些吧。
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