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发布时间:2020-07-14 关键词:
摘要:
分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对,最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。
复考首场刚过,考题正是“支招小作文”系列近期新鲜出炉的“表格”。
本系列上周新推出《地图Q&A》为大家答疑解惑,本周地图真题登场,一起来看看考官最容易被哪些细节打动吧!
Ø 最打动考官的点1:
增加语义密度,一个句子主干就要说清楚前后两个时间点上的变化:
A carriageway will be built as a replacement of the main road. (道路被改建)
The school and residential area will remain south of it. (校园住宅不变)
Ø 最打动考官的点2:
以同位语a loop(环路) 补充the carriageway,以a straight way 补充the main road;
再辅以定语从句(that … )或换用分词短语(going through …)进一步补充/修饰。
Ø 最打动考官的点3:
“改建”可以这样说:… be built as replacements/a replacement of …(介词短语充当状语成分)
Ø 最打动考官的点4:
除了用“remain”,还可以:
1- The plan affects neither the location nor the number of something. (“neither…nor… 二者都不”对名词进行否定;当然,视具体图表,我们还可以有“the plan affects neither the location nor the size”,举一反三,轻松掌握!)
2- something will stay where it is. (where地点状语从句)
再看一篇,
技能点get!
Ø 最打动考官的点1:
利用“with+noun”引出其他设施,增加语义密度:
The area will be expanded, with a shop and a café in the corners.
The land will be redevloped, with a shopping centre built as a replacement of the shops.
当整体变化不大时,可先给出一个总述:The area will not change enormously,再以利用“except that…”宾语从句 细述其中有改变的一两项。
Ø 最打动考官的点2:
“改建”:
Replacing the west court, a leisure pool will be built. (现在分词短语作伴随状语)
Where the west court is now, there will be aleisure pool.(地点状语从句)
Ø 最打动考官的点3:
A changing room, closely adjacent to the café, … 形容词短语后置,补充/修饰名词