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发布时间:2021-09-17 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要: An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry.
An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry.
Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
应对上面这个题目,考生在主体段有一句是这么写的:
Despite the economic reasons, there is another reason for national reputation.
※ 这句话是主段的第二个分论点,起头介绍第二个原因。
改写如下
Economic reasons aside, there is another reason: to enhance the national reputation.
解析:
despite 介词,“虽然,尽管”,表示虽可能有其他障碍,但这件事还是成真了。例:Despite applying for hundreds of jobs, he is still out of work.
分析原因时,这两个原因基本属于并列或递进关系,所以改写成economic reasons aside, “抛开经济原因不提”。
reason 常见的搭配有:
reason for … 某情况发生的理由,如reason for her decision她所做决定的理由
reason why … 某情况发生的理由,reason why you’re so late你迟到这么久的理由
原句中,国家的名声已经是原因本身了,所以改用冒号解释说明reason。