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发布时间:2022-01-13 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要: When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in.
When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
句子示例
Unlike parks or sports facilities, which are either friendly only to people who like the outdoors or suitable only for people who like sports, shopping centers suit almost everyone.
句子解析
内容维度
通过对比的方式,这句话说到了parks or sports facilities的不好,同时对应说到了shopping centers对应的好。
这句话的内容更多是说parks or sports facilities的不好。主句部分说到了shopping centers对应的好,但是说的笼统。说明这句话后的下文会就此展开,于是这句话起到了“总写”的作用。
词汇维度
这句话的状语部分引起对比,说到了parks or sports facilities的不好。在主句部分以对应的方式说到了shopping centers的好。但是说的很笼统,由此起到了“总写”的作用,说明下文会就“具体怎么不好”展开。
语法和句型维度
“facilities”是可数名词复数,意为“设施、设备”。归类为写作通用词。
“the outdoors”是名词词组,意为“户外”。归类为写作主题词。
“suitable”是形容词,意为“适合的”。归类为写作通用词。
“suit”是及物动词,意为“适合于”。归类为写作通用词。
文脉逻辑维度
以unlike引起对比关系的状语,提及parks or sports facilities,然后用非限定性定语从句具体阐述“怎么不好”。非限定定语从句中,还有一个平行结构值得注意。
主句部分短小。一个简单的“主—谓—宾”结构对应着parks or sports facilities的“不好”写出shopping centers的好。