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发布时间:2022-03-10 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要:Some people say it is the government responsibility to transport children to school. Others believe parents should transport their children to school.
Some people say it is the government responsibility to transport children to school. Others believe parents should transport their children to school.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示范】
Besides, if government has a sufficient budget, it should provide such welfare services to its taxpayers, as those parents are very likely to be wrapped up in their work, with no more time allocated to giving their children a ride to school.
句子解析
内容维度(TR)
本文分情况讨论,分述政府和家长两方谁应该接送孩子,最终分情况讨论,什么情况下谁负责。这一句写于 政府应该负责接送 的段落。
这两句话为本段第二个分论点,政府对于其纳税人,有义务提供福利,并阐述理由。
文脉逻辑维度(CC)
这句话中的条件状语从句为后文的反驳提供切入点:如果政府没有足够的预算,对校车的支出可能会导致其他领域的发展资金减少。
词汇维度(LR)
“welfare”是名词,意为“福利;福利机构”。归类为写作通用词。
“taxpayer”是名词,意为是“纳税人”。归类为写作通用词。
“be wrapped up in”这里是动词词组,意为“把全部精力放在某事上[以至于没有时间关心别的事]”。归类为写作高光词。
“allocate sth. to sth.”是动词词组,意为“分配某物到…”,等于“allot sth. to sth.”,常用于<时间、金钱、精力>分配。归类为写作通用词。注意:to为介词。
语法和句型维度(GRA)
长句先挑主句句型:if引导的条件状语从句,主句,后跟as引导的原因状语从句
独立主格常规格式:(with) + n. + v.ing/v.ed, 主动v.ing,被动v.ed,and连接简单句时,可尝试改为独立主格,只需将“and no more time is allocated to giving their children a ride to school”中,and改为with,动词被动关系,删去be动词is,即可实现语法维度的提升。