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支招雅思小作文| 混合数据图

发布时间:2023-04-27 关键词:雅思小作文

摘要:The table and pie charts below show the proportion of local and non-local students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2009.

      [2023/ 4/ 22] The table and pie charts below show the proportion of local and non-local students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2009.
支招雅思小作文

  开头段:

  The table and pie charts illustrate changes in the figures for domestic and international students studying in Australian universities for the year 2001 and 2009.

  概述段:

  Overall, the 9-year period witnessed a significant rise in the total number of Australian university students. Also, there were more local students than foreign students in both years.

      【思路要点】:

  - university students的总人数上升。

  - Local人数在2年内都超过non-local人数。

  主体段

  思路1:按照图分段 (本篇文章 采用此种分段思路)

  Body 1:表格信息描述

  Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the total number of university students in Australia witnessed a noticeable rise from 33000 in 2001 to 39000 in 2009. More specifically, in the initial year, there were 28300 local students, which was almost 7 times the figure for their non-local counterparts. Afterwards, there emerged a significant decline in the figure for domestic students to 27300 in 2009, while the number of international students more than doubled to 11700.

  【思路要点】:

  - Australian university 总人数从33000显著上升到39000.

  - local总数从2001年的28300下降到 2009年的27300,占比下降了16%。

  - 对比而言,non-local总人数翻了2倍多,到2009年达到11700。

  Body2:饼图--local students

  From the first pie chart, it is manifest that in the original year, 86% of all the college students were local ones, 46% of whom were females. Subsequently, the figure for female local students only dropped slightly by 6% in the following 8 years, where as a noticeable drop could be found in the percentage of males from 40% to 30%.

  【思路要点】:

  - 2001年local占比86%,46%是female。

  - female轻微下降了6%,但males从40%显著下降到30%。

  Body 3:饼图--non-local students

  As for international students, there were 14% of all the students who came from abroad in the year 2001, consisting of 9% males and 5% females. After 8 years, there were almost no changes to the former figure. However, the proportion of non-local females was on a sharp climb, reaching 20% in 2009. As a result, females outnumbered their male counterparts in the end of the given period.

  【思路要点】:

  - 2001年non-local占比14%,包含9%的males和5%的females

  - 2009年,male占比几乎不变。但是,female占比急剧上涨到20%

  - female在这一年占比反超male

  主体段 思路2:按照时间分段(整合表格、饼图信息 综合对比。)

  Body 1:2001年

  - 学生总人数33000

  - 86%是local,男女占比相似

  - 4700人是non-local,male占比(9%)大约是female的2倍

  Body 2:2009年

  - 总人数显著上升到39000

  - non- local人数急剧上升了16%,到达11700

  -其中,non-local females在这一年比例 超过non-local males的比例

  - local人数显著下降到27300

  - 其中,females的比例轻微下降了6%,但是males的比例显著下降到30%.

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