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摘要:Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behavior. Others say that the amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior
Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behavior. Others say that the amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】
Excessive screen time can lead to a sedentary lifestyle, contributing to health issues such as obesity.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子分析了长时间看电视对孩子的影响。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
这个句子可以用来证明第二个观点,本句之后写作者可以进一步分析,例如:如果长时间看电视,户外活动的时间会减少。对于discuss both views的提问类型,写作者还需要讨论个观点,分析电视内容对孩子行为的影响。当然,写作者可以得出结论说两者都会对孩子造成影响。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“excessive”是形容词,表示“过多的”。
“screen”是名词,表示“屏幕”。
“sedentary”是形容词,表示“久坐的”。
“obesity”是名词,表示“肥胖”。它的形容词形式是obese。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
本句的主语是excessive screen time,句子的谓语can lead,介词to后面是宾语部分a sedentary lifestyle,句子最后是现在分词contributing以及介词to和后面的宾语health issues such as obesity。
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