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9月27日雅思大作文示范写作 | 支持 vs 反对政府投资寻找外星生命

发布时间:2025-09-30 关键词:雅思大作文示范写作

摘要:9月27日雅思大作文示范写作 | 支持 vs 反对政府投资寻找外星生命


每场雅思考试之后,时间分享本场考试雅思A类大作文的范文权威解析。

 本期作者:张婷婷

 

2025年9月27日雅思大作文题目

 

Some people think governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while others think it is a waste of money when some problems are not solved on the Earth. Discuss both sides and what is your opinion.

 

题目分析:这道题目属于典型的双边观点讨论类议论文,要求考生:客观讨论两种对立观点(支持 vs 反对政府投资寻找外星生命)并明确给出个人观点;

 

关键词

• governments spend money: 强调公共资源的使用,涉及预算分配与政策优先级,需考虑纳税人利益与社会公平。

• waste of money 核心争议:是否机会成本过高?地球存在贫困、气候危机、疾病等紧迫问题,是否应优先解决现实苦难?

• problems on Earth 可具体化为:气候变化(全球变暖)、贫富差距(发展中国家饥荒)、公共卫生(疟疾、新冠)、战争与难民危机等。

 


范文及解析

Introduction

 

In recent decades, an increasing number of nations, those developed ones in particular, have allocated substantial public funds to space exploration, including the search for extraterrestrial life. While some argue that such investment may yield long-term benefits for humanity, I contend that these resources would be better spent addressing urgent terrestrial challenges.

 

 解析

❖ substantial   adj.大量的,价值巨大的;   

❖ extraterrestrial   adj.地球外的

❖ yield    v.产生(收益、效益等),产生(结果);

❖ address   v.处理,设法解决;

 

译文参考:

近几十年来,越来越多的国家(尤其是发达国家)投入了巨额公共资金用于太空探索,其中包括对地外生命的搜寻。尽管有人认为此类投资可能为人类带来长期益处,但我个人认为,这些资源应更好地用于解决紧迫的地球本土挑战 。

 

Body paragraph 1

Proponents of space exploration argue that the search for habitable planets is a forward-looking strategy. With the global population continuing to rise and natural resources being depleted at an alarming rate, identifying alternative habitats may become essential for human survival. Moreover, Earth faces potential existential threats, such as asteroid collisions, which have historically caused mass extinctions. Discovering Earth-like planets could, in theory, serve as a safeguard against such catastrophic events.

 

解析

❖ forward-looking  adj.有远见的;

❖ deplete  v.大量减少,耗尽;

❖ asteroid collision 小行星碰撞;

❖ catastrophic  adj.灾难性的;

 

译文参考:

太空探索的支持者认为,搜寻宜居行星是一项具有前瞻性的战略。随着全球人口持续增长,自然资源正以惊人的速度枯竭,寻找替代栖息地可能成为人类生存的关键所在 。此外,地球面临着小行星撞击等潜在的生存威胁——这类事件在历史上曾导致过大规模物种灭绝。从理论上讲,发现类地行星可为应对此类灾难性事件提供保障 。

 

Body paragraph 2

However, from my perspective, prioritizing space research over domestic issues is ethically questionable. Millions of people worldwide still suffer from poverty, preventable diseases, and inadequate infrastructure. Redirecting even a fraction of space budgets toward healthcare, education, and environmental protection could yield immediate and tangible improvements. For instance, increased funding for medical research could accelerate the development of treatments for chronic illnesses such as diabetes or cancer, thereby enhancing quality of life and reducing healthcare burdens. Similarly, investment in sustainable urban infrastructure such as electric public transport systems could mitigate pollution and improve daily living conditions.

 

解析

❖ prioritize   v.按优先顺序列出;优先考虑(处理);

❖ redirect    v.(以新的方式或目的)重新使用;

❖ a fraction of 一小部分;一部分;

❖ tangible   adj.明确的,真实的;

❖accelerate   v.(使)加快,促进;

❖ chronic     adj.(疾病)慢性的,长期的;

❖mitigate  v.<正式>减轻,缓和;

 

译文参考:

 

然而,在我个人看来,将太空研究置于地球本土问题之上的优先级排序,在伦理层面存在争议 。全球仍有数百万人口受困于贫困、可预防疾病与落后的基础设施。即便将太空预算的一小部分转投至医疗、教育与环境保护领域,也能带来立竿见影且切实可见的改善 。例如,增加医疗研究资金投入,可加速糖尿病、癌症等慢性疾病治疗方案的研发进程,进而提升人类生活质量并减轻医疗负担 ;同样,对电动公共交通系统等可持续城市基础设施进行投资,能够有效缓解污染问题,改善人们的日常生活条件 。

 

Conclusion

In conclusion, while the pursuit of extraterrestrial life may offer speculative benefits, it is imperative that governments give top priority to solving pressing terrestrial problems. Only by addressing the immediate needs of their populations can nations ensure a sustainable and equitable future.

 

解析

❖ speculative  adj.推测的,潜在的,推断的;

❖ imperative   adj.极重要的,必要的;

❖give top priority to  高度重视,优先考虑,把……放在首位;

 

译文参考:

综上,尽管探索地外生命可能带来潜在益处,但各国政府必须将解决紧迫的地球本土问题置于首要地位 。唯有回应民众的迫切需求,各国才能确保一个具有可持续性与公平性的未来 。

 

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