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全面解读雅思写作各大失分点(4)

  接上一篇《全面解读雅思写作各大失分点(3)》。相信同学们经过前几篇内容的学习,应该已经有所收获,下面我们继续为同学们发布雅思写作失分点解析。北京新航道小编给同学们做了一下汇总分析,希望同学们能够在下面的文章中受到一些小启示,有则改之无则加勉。

  答案很简单:标记清楚这些句子间的逻辑关系。有两种:

  并列关系

  示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing.

  变为:I sat down beside her and I said nothing.

  示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him.

  变为:He asked me a question and I answered him.

  从属关系

  1)运用各类从句,形成主从符合句,主要包括:

  状语从句

  宾语从句

  定语从句

  主语从句

  同位语从句

  2)运用非谓语动词进行从属方式的处理。此时,部分句子的主要动词变成了动词的非谓语形式,致使整体的复杂句式变成了简单句式,主要手段就是按照规则进行了下列三种形态的变化:

  动词的ing形式

  动词的过去分词形式

  动词不定式形式

  从属关系示例(以状语从句为例)

  示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him.

  示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up!

  示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!

  示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.

  示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.

  示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.

  示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic.

  非谓语动词方式处理示例

  示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous .

  可变为:Sitting beside her, I felt very nervous.

  或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous.

  示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies.

  可变为:To quit smoking, I eat candies.

  示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed.

  可以变为:Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed.

  示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo.

  可以变为:Dressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.

  定语从句方式处理

  定语从句当然是属于“从属”的行列,所以,是处理为从属方式的手段之一,而且用途极大。请看下面的例子:

  This is the only book.

  I read the book during the holiday.

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