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发布时间:2013-04-18 关键词:托福写作思路实例指导(尊师重道)
摘要:托福写作思路实例指导(尊师重道)
托福写作是一个重头戏,对大家的考察也是综合性的。北京新航道托福频道以一些真题为例为大家分析一下做题的思路,希望帮助考生地理解题意,地创作,下面请看今天的题目,关于尊师重道的。
托福独立写作题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer. Nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past.
观点 不同意
1 人们对教育关注度
2 现在的教师只是更加渊博得到尊重
3 让步
As the education is playing more and more important role in social life, one controversial issue comes up that whether nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past. Admittedly, we are emphasizing that everyone is equal and stressing the right to express our ideas different from others. However, can we say that nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past? Perhaps not. Despite of different people hold various perspectives, I, given this chance, prefer to assert that nowadays students respect teachers as much as in the past. My point of view, involves the fundamental and deep discussions as follows.
To begin with, one should emphasize that nowadays people’s concerns about the education are becoming more and more than in the past. It is undeniable that the teachers play the vital roles in the education and get more respect than in the past. To make it more compelling, let me use more details to demonstrate it. As we all know, to make ourselves more outstanding in this competitive society, we should study hard to compete with others. In addition, the teachers guide us in our study life and then we must respect teachers to gain the knowledge.However, in the past people always adopted several children and they main concerned about how to solve problem about the supplication of food instead of the education. Due to the change of importance of the teachers in the society, students would respect less than nowadays. Obviously, nowadays students respect teachers more than in the past.
In addition, another essential and compelling argument that always deserves people’s attention is that the nowadays teachers have more abundant knowledge and more wide perspectives, and then students become more adore teachers than before. Both common sense and our daily experience inform us that with the development of science and technology, teachers have more ways to gain the knowledge than what I can imagine, such as searching Internet, devoting themselves in to the specific research and so forth. What’s more, the nowadays teachers gain the higher degree than before, such as masters and professors instead of the undergraduate. Nevertheless, in the past teachers always gained knowledge from books. Hence nowadays teachers will be more profound than the teacher in the past and gain more respect from students.
Admittedly, there are some students do not respect teachers. However the number just occupies the small rate of all students. Furthermore we should acknowledge that there must students do not respect teacher in the past either.
To sum up, some people might still remain unconvinced, but the reasons I have analyzed would make them more aware of the dimensions of this issue. Hence at last, there will be no doubt that the nowadays students do more respect teachers than in the past.
批改后:
总体上感觉不错的,错误上也不多,我就改改,也从中学习下下。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer. Nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past.
观点 不同意
1 人们对教育关注度
2 现在的教师只是更加渊博得到尊重
3 让步
As the education is playing more and more important role in social life, one controversial issue comes up that whether nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past.(词的位置 that nowadays whether or not students respcet teachers as much as in the past) Admittedly, we are emphasizing that everyone is equal and stressing the right to express our(their) ideas different from others. However, can we say that nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past? Perhaps not. Despite of different people hold various perspectives, I, given this chance, prefer to assert that nowadays students respect teachers as much as in the past. My point of view, involves the fundamental and deep discussions as follows.
To begin with, one should emphasize(这个前面用过吧,意思好像也不对怎么是强调呢应该是了解吧realize) that nowadays people’s concerns about the education arebecoming more and more(far more不是正在是已经) than in the past. It is undeniable that the teachers play the vital roles in the education and get more respect than in the past. To make it more compelling, let me use more details to demonstrate it. As we all know, to make ourselves more outstanding in this competitive society, we should study hard to compete with others. In addition, the teachers guide us in our study life and then we must respect teachers to gain the knowledge.However, in the past people always adopted several children and they main concerned about how to solve problem about the supplication of food instead of the education. Due to the change of importance of the teachers (rised)in the society, students would respect less than nowadays(这里改下). Obviously, nowadays students respect teachers more than in the past.
In addition, another essential and compelling argument that always deserves people’s attention is that the nowadays teachers have more abundant knowledge and more wide perspectives, and then students become more adore(v动词直接adore teachers) teachers than before. (with)Both common sense and our daily experience inform us that with the development of science and technology, teachers have more ways to gain the knowledge than what I can imagine, such as searching Internet, devoting themselves in to the specific research and so forth. What’s more, the nowadays teachers gain the higher degree than before, such as masters and professors instead of the undergraduate. Nevertheless, in the past teachers always gained knowledge from books. Hence nowadays teachers will be more profound than the teacher in the past and gain more respect from students.
Admittedly, there are some students do not respect teachers. However the number just occupies the small rate of all students. Furthermore we should acknowledge that there must were students who do not respect teacher in the past either.
To sum up, some people might still remain unconvinced, but the reasons I have analyzed would make them more aware of the dimensions of this issue. Hence at last, there will be no doubt that the nowadays students do more respect teachers than in the past.
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