托福写作要点在考试中启着至关重要的作用，同学们要知道这些信息在考试中的地位以及是如何出现的。北京新航道小编整理了一些方法，希望对同学们有帮助。

　　I 准确的句子表达

　　1.句型分析

　　英语的句型包括以下几种，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中，一般使用复合句，辅以并列句和并列复合句，当然肯定要有简单句，做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。

　　a.Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

　　这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。

　　b.This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

　　这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。

　　2.有问题的句子的列举

　　考生写的句子容易出现三个问题：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接连句，三是句子连接不正确。

　　1)破碎句

　　所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词)

　　正确句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

　　正确句：He did not come because he was sick.

　　2)接连句

　　所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。

　　接连句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　3)句子连接不正确

　　所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

　　不正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　正确句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　II 表达

　　正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

　　倒装句: Only in extreme cases does luck work. (否定词位于句首的倒装。)

　　正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.

　　强调句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)

　　正常句：The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

　　状语前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.

　　正常句:However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

　　插入语：New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)

　　主语多样：

　　1.她突然想到了一个主意。

　　She suddenly had an idea.

　　通常情况下，考生会马上对这句话进行翻译，基本不会动句子结构。但是以人作为主语的英语句子总是不能够很吸引人，所以这个句子如果稍微做下修改，以后面的宾语“主意”做主语，这个句子会发生一些变化。

　　An idea suddenly occurred to her.

　　III 实用句型

　　1.It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.

　　努力准备新托福考试是值得的。

　　2.Nothing is more important than to receive education.

　　没有比接受教育更重要的了。

　　3.The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.

　　白领压力日益增加的原因是他们在事业上有所追求。

　　4.It is time the related department took proper measures.

　　(虚拟句式)相关部门早该采取适当的措施了。

　　以上就是托福写作要点，希望对同学们的考试有帮助。北京新航道小编预祝各位考试顺利。

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