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如何分析托福写作语言多样化?

发布时间:2014-01-21 关键词:如何分析托福写作语言多样化?

摘要:托福写作语言多样化,不仅是对语法的考验更是对一些词汇的考查,北京新航道小编整理了一些方法,希望对同学们有帮助。

  托福写作语言多样化,不仅是对语法的考验更是对一些词汇的考查,北京新航道小编整理了一些方法,希望对同学们有帮助。

  长短句变换:简单句、并列句和复合句交替运用

  长句准确生动,长于说明推理;短句简洁明快,意义明确,印象深刻,描述动作,表明主旨,总结归纳,非短句不可。既然各有所长,在写作时应根据实际需要,交替使用简单句、并列句和复合句,以达到“段间长短不一,全篇句式万千”、丰富多样的效果,给读者以及阅卷老师以永恒的新鲜感。

  结构多样化:我们学过非谓语动词结构(包括不定式结构和分词结构),无动词结构,分隔结构,比较结构,独立结构,with复合结构,特殊否定结构,it结构,平行结构,强调结构,倒装结构,等等。其中最为神通广大的是非谓语动词结构,在句中或作主语、宾语,或作表语、宾语补足语,或作定语修饰名词,或作状语表示条件、原因、让步、时间、方式、目的、结果、伴随状况等,不一而足。

  非谓语动词结构可以简化大部分英语从句,产生语言简练,结构丰富多样的效果,请看下列转化实例:

  名词从句可转化为非谓语动词结构  1. That John won the marathon surprised us.  John’s winning the Marathon surprised us.  2. I have not decided whether I should vote for Clint.  I have not decided whether to vote for Clint.

  定语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构  1. The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.  2. The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mother’s.  3. The next train that arrives is from New York.

  状语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构  1. After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.  Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.  2. When they are heated metals expand.  (When) Heated, metals expand.  3. Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.  Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.  4. I spoke slowly and clearly in order that the audience could understand me.  …in order for the audience to understand me.  5. If we are united, we stand; if we are divided, we fail.  United, we stand; divided, we fail.  6. Though he has lived in Canada for tree years, he still cannot speak English well.  Having lived in Canada for three years, he still cannot speak English well.

  无动词结构也是阅卷老师喜欢看到的亮点,原因就在于由于汉语写作惯性,中国学生很少能想到使用该结构。

  由于写作惯性,同学们写英语作文时,很可能不会想到上述结构,而是写成分句。

  主语多样化:中国人习惯于用人称主语,而英语中则常用无灵主语(inanimate subject),即无生命的事物作主语。

  开头多样化:开头除了使用主语外,还可以用各种各样的结构  1 An expert in forest fire control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods.同位语  2 Angry, Mr. Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong arguments.形容词短语  3 Tired and dirty, the boys returned to the camp.形容词短语  4 Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level.现在分词短语  5 Troubled by a dream, Tim woke up with a start.过去分词  6 To succeed in that course, you must attend every class.不定式短语  7 In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker.介词短语  8 Because he was tired and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper.原因状语句  9 What you impulsively do in haste you may regret( )in leisure.宾语从句提前

  运用修辞手法:排比;对偶1. I came, I saw, I conquered. 我来了,我看了,我征服(凯撒大帝语)

  以上就是简单的举例,希望同学们认真学习上面的托福写作语言多样化的方法。北京新航道小编预祝各位考试顺利。

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