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托福写作文章欣赏(66)

发布时间:2012-08-02 关键词:托福写作文章欣赏(66)

摘要:托福写作文章欣赏(66)

 

  北京新航道致力于为考生提供托福考试的相关讯息。写作是考生的难题。词汇量有了,但是不知道怎么去表达,常常流水账似的文章。其实,写作并不是那么简单的按照语法来造句。首先要明确自己要写什么,其次要分配好文章的架构,然后才理顺思路,最后来遣词造句填内容,还要考虑语法、词汇等问题。所以说拿个写作不是那么容易的事情。那么,怎么样写出一篇好文章来?北京新航道带着大家去看看那些好的文章是怎么做到的。帮助大家积累一些经验技巧为己所用。

 

  A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why.

 

  If my friend Joey wants to move to Beijing, I think she will definitely like this greatest city in our country, even though she might find something she dislikes.

 

  The weather might be one thing that she dislikes. The weather in Beijing is characterized by dry climate and it is much windy and dusty than that of Guangzhou city. Joey is very sensitive about her skin, so she will definitely hate dusty winds in Beijing. Moreover, Beijing's winter is far too much colder than that of Guangzhou, it might take Joey, as many other people came from the South, a very long time to get accustomed to. Nevertheless, she might well enjoy winter in the North, since she has never seen snowflakes in reality. I remembered the shining of yearning and eager in her eyes when I once told her what winters in the North look like.

 

  She might be always irritated by heavy traffic in Beijing, though taxis in Beijing cost much less than in Guangzhou. When I was in Guangzhou, seldom was I trapped by traffic jams. It must be ridiculous for her to have spent more than two hours and still didn't arrive at the destination which is merely 10-kilometer away. And the most ludicrous thing is, even if you possess a private car, it is more likely to be useless, for parking lots are always crowded, which means more time is to be wasted. One good news for her is that the bus system and subway system in Beijing are well developed and more convenient, and an even more delight one is that she won't have to bear that odor of bromhidrosis owing to burning weather as she once experienced in buses of Guangzhou.

 

  What she will definitely love is the cultural ethos of the city. Beijing has a history probably longer than any other big city in China. To visit all historical landscapes in Beijing, she will need at least three years, no kidding! Beijing has the most famous and excellent universities, the largest libraries, the richest museums, yet most important of all, her best friend! Amazingly, in this aged city, people are sometimes more international. Joey is especially fond of art, and Beijing is the right place for her, which is much frequented for concerts of international singers or other musicians, and she will even be able to attend CuiJian's private concert in a coffee shop on a rainy autumn weekend. [407 Words]

 

  上面是一篇的托福写作文章。考生可以看看,分析一下别人是怎么写的,然后运用到自己的文章中来。多看,多想,多练,相信大家都能成为写作能手的。

 

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