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托福写作文章欣赏(68)

发布时间:2012-08-02 关键词:托福写作文章欣赏(68)

摘要:托福写作文章欣赏68)

 

  北京新航道致力于为考生提供托福考试的相关讯息。写作是考生的难题。词汇量有了,但是不知道怎么去表达,常常流水账似的文章。其实,写作并不是那么简单的按照语法来造句。首先要明确自己要写什么,其次要分配好文章的架构,然后才理顺思路,最后来遣词造句填内容,还要考虑语法、词汇等问题。所以说拿个写作不是那么容易的事情。那么,怎么样写出一篇好文章来?北京新航道带着大家去看看那些好的文章是怎么做到的。帮助大家积累一些经验技巧为己所用。

 

  You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy?

 

  It seems not a difficult decision for me. But if I was given the gift of money in different time, I would have different answers.

 

  If I was given the money when I was in my high school, I will buy a ticket to a concert. I had been longing for attending concerts of famous artists to enjoy those transcendent pieces such as saxophone of Kenny G., rock and roll of Cuijian, and romantic songs of Luo Dayou. Unfortunately I just was not able to afford those exorbitant prices. The money I was given should be better if enough for several tickets, for that means I could take along my best friends, whose situations were much similar to mine.

 

  If I was given the money when I was in the university, I will buy a fine piece of jewelry, and give it to my girl friend as a casual present, for we might enjoy a certain concert, but hardly could it be permanently impressive. Memories are always not reliable. We tend to simply forget any thing – at least memories are somewhat distorted – if time past long enough. But if I bought my girl friend a piece of jewelry, not costly though it might be, it would be a perfect reminder, being never changed.

 

  If I was given the money recently, it would only make me feel funny. I don't want to go to concerts anymore, because I became more and more reluctant to present in crowd public places, besides I have bought a super Hi-Fi which always brings me identical pleasure. And I don't want to buy any jewelry, for it is meaningless for a man who is now solitary. Nevertheless, if I was forced to accept some money as a gift – it hardly happens – I might buy some books, after all, reading always makes me relaxed and amazed.[312 Words]

 

  上面是一篇的托福写作文章。考生可以看看,分析一下别人是怎么写的,然后运用到自己的文章中来。多看,多想,多练,相信大家都能成为写作能手的。

 

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