托福写作是考生的难题。词汇量够了，却还是写不出好的文章。其实词汇是写作的基础和必备部分，其次就是语法了。句子写不明白，更不必谈去表述自己的观点了，别人也看不懂。在托福考试中，考生们经常在语法上犯错误。在这里，我们给考生整理出的常见的病句，帮助考生来分析，以避免以后在考试的过程中犯同样的错误，保证自己文章的质量。

　　1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　上面是堆托福写作文章的病句的列举和分析，希望考生能够引起重视，并且改正，让自己的写作不必要的错误减少，从而自己的写作分数。只要仔细认真地去总结和改正，相信大家都能拿到理想的分数。

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