托福写作是考生的难题。词汇量够了，却还是写不出好的文章。其实词汇是写作的基础和必备部分，其次就是语法了。句子写不明白，更不必谈去表述自己的观点了，别人也看不懂。在托福考试中，考生们经常在语法上犯错误。在这里，我们给考生整理出的常见的病句，帮助考生来分析，以避免以后在考试的过程中犯同样的错误，保证自己文章的质量。

　　1. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　2. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

　　3. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　4. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　5. When I want to absorb somebody else’s opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　6. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　7. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　8. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　9. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　10. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　上面是堆托福写作文章的病句的列举和分析，希望考生能够引起重视，并且改正，让自己的写作不必要的错误减少，从而自己的写作分数。只要仔细认真地去总结和改正，相信大家都能拿到理想的分数。

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