多年来养成的写作习惯是不容易去掉的，就像是我们写英文写作总是或多或少的带点中国味儿。如果能够摆脱这样的痼疾，相信会让文章增色不少。下面北京新航道托福频道通过十个句子的修改，让大家体会如何改进托福写作中的中式英语的作法，一起看看吧。

　　托福写作中句子的使用是有技巧的。因为结构句可以使托福写作的水平立刻一个层次，也会在同时凸显出考生在英语语言的方面的应用能力。并且写作的评分标准中句型结构也重要，那么怎样才能保证托福写作拿呢?

　　句子：

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.来源：北京新航道托福培训

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　上面一改理论说法，小编通过十个句子的改法为大家形象展示了如何改进托福写作的中式英文，希望大家能够体会到，预祝各位考生都取得理想的成绩。

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