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支招小作文 | 10月26日雅思小作文真题范文。

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  雅思小作文题目

  The charts below show percentages of men and women attending two levels of education in four different regions.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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       高分范文及解析

  类型:同时(同一个时间点)

  不同项(不同regions和不同的gender组)

  Introduction 略

  Body - Paragraph 1

  写作思路:

  1. 鲜明对比(contrast):Europe VS Africa;

  2. 数据范围(range):Latin American & East Asia

  On the secondary level of education, the contrast between Europe and Africa is notable. ←总-分→ 具体说明Europe和Africa分别的具体情况: Europe has thefull attendance in both gender groups, whereas the attendance in Africa is as poor as 30 percent among males and 20 percent among females. Different from Europe or Africa, ←状语部分用来说明下面的信息和上面的信息的逻辑关系 Latin America and East Asia have similar situations of attendance, which range between 40 percent and 60 percent. However, there is a crucial difference that females are proportionally more than males ←“机械描述数据”写法(基础写法) // “解读数据所体现的事实”写法(高级写法)→ females are more likely to attend school than are males in Latin America and are proportionally fewer than males in East Asia.

  Body - Paragraph 2

  写作思路:

  1. 鲜明对比(contrast):Europe VS Africa, Latin American & East Asia;

  2. 数据范围(range):Africa, Latin American & East Asia

  On the tertiary level of education, the contrast between Europe and the other three regions is notable // Europe is markedly different from Africa, Latin American, and East Asia. ←总-分→ 接下来是不是就可以模仿上一段的写作思路啦?当然啦。具体内容略。

  Conclusion 略


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