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　　一篇出众的雅思写作定在开篇就打下了扎实的奠基，如果没有逻辑清晰，表达流畅的开篇段落，你的写作甚至有可能“见官死”。下面是北京新航道为同学们整理的十个经典失败案例，并未同学们附上了简单的修改方案，还望对同学们备考有所帮助：

　　【“见官死”开头之一：啰啰嗦嗦】

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok， this topic is a very good topic. First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much. Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh， this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　【“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕】

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world. For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”.

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