2013/04/2708:15关键词:雅思写作范文赏析之科学进步对生活的影响
今天要与同学们分享的是一篇关于“科学进步对生活的影响”相关话题的雅思写作范文;北京新航道温馨提示:精彩的范文要结合的句子和系统的语法才能造就。希望本篇范文对同学们有所帮助。一起来看吧!
Scientific progress influences our daily life greatly. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
真题解析:科学进步对我们的日常生活有很大的影响。你认为这是一个正面还是负面影响。此题从体裁上属于议论文argumentation,从题材上属于科技类型,也是近年来比较常见的写作话题。笔者在课堂上也进行过讲解。 重复2010年2月27日的机经话题(Technological progress has bought great changes to our society in the last 100 years. However, some people think that it has also brought some negative effects at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this point? 一百年来科技进步带来了很大的社会变革,然而有人认为也带来了消极影响。 你同意这种说法吗?)。
写作分析:
该题在解题思路上比较灵活,既可以写成一边倒,也可以写成两面倒,具体采用哪一种观点可以由考生自己决定。以下提供笔者的思路及写法。
思路分析范例:
1. positive side,
(1) Make life faster, easier and safer
(2) The world is becoming smaller and closer. Modern transportation (trains, cars and planes) makes traveling to distant places possible.
(3)modern communication tools,使人们的交流,与任何地方的人交流,特别使促进了business的发展
(4)longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science
(5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful
(6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education
2. negative side,
(1)机器的使用造成unemployment
(2)电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication.
(3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills. Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and withdrawn.
范文:
As the 21st century continues to unfold, many technologies have arisen, many of which were previously out of the reach of people’s comprehension. Some people are content with the current standard of living and tend to own it to the technical advances whereas an opposing viewpoint is that not all these changes are positive. As a matter fact, few would disagree that the use of scientific progress has its downside yet the upside of it should be better appreciated.
Technology optimists might argue that the employment of technology and science has positive effects on the society and our daily life. The most obvious benefit technologies have brought to us is that it saves numerous amount of time. In the case of making a pair of shoes, almost 70% of manufacturing time could be reduced if it were mass-produced according to some researching findings. Companies could also take advantage of the latest science breakthroughs in the production process, such as installing an assembly line, in order to maximize the production capacity. Meanwhile, the efficiency in study, which is of great advantage to students, may also be guaranteed with the help from computer technology, online information and tele-education. Furthermore, compared to making a pair of tailor-made shoes, a pair of mass-produced Nike sneaker is more cost-effective for the fact that machine saves labor cost greatly. Therefore, it is undoubted that advanced science technologies are of great benefits.
Unfortunately, many science outputs have put people at great disadvantages. For those who study online through computers, especially those who are lack of self-control, they often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, resulting in a tendency of being more introverted, self-centered and withdrawn. Moreover, some health problems, such as obesity, diabetes and stroke are attributed to the increasingly involvement of technology in food production. It is not uncommon that people, especially children, overtake the fast food and get fatter and clumsy. So it is apparent that the dark side of the technology is inevitable.
As what has been mentioned above, although the utilization of modern science may exert many adverse effects to the users, especially young students and the physiological defect is also unavoidable, the scientific progress could be of great advantages in the workplace or to the adults in the workforce, which enhances people’s daily life. As far as I am concerned, I would say that its benefits generally outweigh the demerits in most cases. It seems to be a fact whenever a new technology arises, there must be some problems as well as some strength. The key point is that we should foster the benefits and lessen the weakness.
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