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　　在雅思写作中经常有一些马虎的同学忘记备考过程中的重点，一再的犯错。下面北京新航道小编要为同学们举一些同学们犯错的例子，并且附上了改正建议。一起来看详细内容：

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok， this topic is a very good topic. First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much. Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh， this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world. For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”.

　　上面这两个雅思写作错误是我们北京新航道老师在课堂上发现同学们常犯的，希望同学们引起重视。预祝大家考试成功!

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