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　　同学们除了上面我们介绍的雅思写作错误，还会犯一些类似“重复表达”、“胡乱翻译”等错误，虽然不常见，但却依然存在同学们的写作文章中。下面北京新航道小编就来为大家举例介绍一些修改建议。

　　“见官死”开头之八：意思重复原地踏步

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

　　“见官死”开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence： “Many sons， many lucks”……

　　正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

　　Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

　　We all know， our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said： “Know is know， don’t know is don’t know”……

　　Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

　　Chinese old words says very good： Dragon born dragon， phoenix born phoenix， rat’s son can make hole……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　I believe one sentence：“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say： “Good has good pay， bad has bad pay”.

　　“见官死”开头之十： 观点武断 态度强硬

　　典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion， confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence， they all have failed.

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem， very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules， we should put all of them into prison. If we do that， I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more

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