2012/08/0604:48关键词:雅思写作范文归纳整理(1)
雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛,与雅思考试中的其他几项做比较,写作要考察我们的能力比较多,包括语言构架能力,整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇,还要多看范文,多和范文做比较,找出自己的不足,及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic.
Are computers an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
题目解析:
Topic words:
Computers Essential features / absolutely necessary
Modern education / good education
Task words:
There are no specific task words. Three separate questions are given.
Questions I should ask myself:
Do I think computers are essential for education? What subjects do I think are best be learnt using computers? What do I think are the features of a good education, and are computers important in it?
The answer must:
Answer each of the three related questions. If you answer the second and third question you will answer the first question, which is the most general and gives the basic topic of the essay. Show which subjects can benefit from the use of a computer, and explain why a computer is so useful. Show what cannot be taught by computer, and explain why a computer cannot help with those areas. After explaining when computers are useful and when not, write a compulsion in which you say whether computers are essential in education or not, using arguments from your essay.
雅思写作范文:
Computers are now essential in many areas of life – modern banking, retail and information exchange among others. However, this is not true for education. At a simple level some subjects may be better taught using computers, but to explain important concepts a human teacher is still indispensable. - Introduction shows main idea
There are some subjects in which a computer can be used successfully to teach. Elementary mathematics, elementary language leaning, any area which requires a student to memorize basic facts through repetition is well suited to computer learning. The computer can be programmed to provide an endless number of simple questions, and as the student answers these questions the facts are learned and reinforced. - Why computers do well, with examples
However, in the learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate. A computer can evaluate an answer as right or wrong, but it cannot determine why. It cannot find out why a student is making mistakes, and then re-present important concepts in a different way so the student will understand. It cannot determine at what stage in a mathematics problem the student has made an error, it can only indicate that the final answer is wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught by computers, as there are too many variables for a computer to deal with successfully. - What computers cannot be, with an example
Thus, while computers may be useful as a tool for practicing simple skills, they are not an essential feature of modern education, because they cannot monitor a student's grasp of concepts, nor evaluate a student's reasoning. Until further developments in computers are made the human teacher will remain indispensable. - Conclusion re-states main ideas
Remember: this sample answer is one of several satisfactory ways to answer the question. Other essays which respond to the writing task would also be acceptable.
Source: Prepare for IELTS, by Vanessa Todd &Penny Cameron, 1996, UTS, Australia.
积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法,但同学们要在老师的指导下循序渐进的,我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子,过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。
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