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　　雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛，与雅思考试中的其他几项做比较，写作要考察我们的能力比较多，包括语言构架能力，整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇，还要多看范文，多和范文做比较，找出自己的不足，及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。

　　题目：There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquency. Analyze the possible causes that give rise to this phenomenon and offer some feasible recommendations.

　　经典语料库：

　　1.juvenile crime rate = adolescent crime rate = the rate of crime among youth= the rate of youth crime青少年犯罪率

　　2.psychology of juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪心理

　　3.young offender 少年犯

　　4.embark on the criminal road 走上犯罪道路

　　5.domestic violence =family violence 家庭暴力

　　6.distrusting and fearful 猜疑和恐惧

　　7.pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media 色情和其它庸俗的节目

　　8.to be led astray 被引入迷途

　　9.enact relevant legislations 立法

　　10.crack down youth crime 降低犯罪

　　精彩路标：

　　1.this essay will attempt to 这篇文章将要

　　2.crimes can be drastically reduced by --- 可以降低犯罪率

　　3.Education has an indispensable role to play in 教育在某方面发挥了不和或缺的作用

　　4.One the of most contributing factors of _______ could be attributed to 一个重要的原因可以被归结为

　　5.Considering the seriousness of the issue, we have no alterative but to implement some practical solutions to resolve it. 考虑到问题的严重性，我们没有办法只能想出一些可行的措施去解决它

　　6.join hands in resolving 在解决---方面共同努力

　　范文：

　　① Never has the rate of crime among youth in our society been as high as it now is. The rate of youth crime is increasing at an alarmingly rapid rate, for reasons which are not easily explained.(改写题目，介绍背景)This essay will attempt to discover some of the crime rate's contributing factors as well as explore some possible solutions to help resolve the issue.(写作意图)

　　② One the of most contributing factors of the increase in youth crime could be attributed to the environment in which the children are raised,(年轻人的成长环境) that is to say, an environment of violence and fear. Such an environment often leads to low self-esteem and many other health concerns, as well as making the children very distrusting and fearful of those around them.

　　③ Still, pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media(色情的和其他庸俗的传媒信息)often exert great negative influence on the youngsters, because the young can, many times, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, it is possible for them to be led astray very quickly and easily.

　　④ Last of all , many different products used to commit crimes(犯罪工具的泛滥)are very easily and cheaply available to our youth. In fact, guns are sold in a very large number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for young people to embark on the criminal road.

　　⑤ Considering the seriousness of the issue, we have no alterative but to implement some practical solutions to resolve it. First of all, the government should attach greater importance to the problem, while also enact relevant legislations to crack down youth crime.(政府立法降低犯罪)Meanwhile, much emphasis should be put on strengthening education,(加强教育) for it will aid us in raising healthier, happier, and more well-behaved young generation. Also, families must take every step necessary to ensure that their children could grow up in an environment which is full of affection, safe and free from various kinds of violence.(家庭的关爱) Only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will we begin to see the rate of youth crime fall down as it should be.

　　积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法，但同学们要在老师的指导下循序渐进的，我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子，过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。

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