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　　随着今年出国热席卷我国，雅思考试作为赴英联邦留学的必经之路也已成为我国考生不得不接受的现实。不仅这样，参加考试的考生更是趋于低龄化发展。其中不乏一中小学生。而生活阅历和词汇量的经验薄弱给他们在雅思写作上带来的困难就远远大于那些大学生了。为了帮助大家雅思写作能力，北京新航道雅思为大家整理了一些材料，希望能够帮助大家轻松应试。

　　Topic:

　　Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

　　According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against.

　　Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal numbrs of male and female students in every subject because it will be balance of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. In addition, nowadays, the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way.

　　Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of arguments against that is some subjects not suitable for each other. for example, some subjects of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female because there are different of body between male and female.

　　In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male an female students in every subject. Moreover, it depend on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic.

　　4分的原因：

　　首先，该同学在语法上的缺陷是致命的，多数句子都不符合英语句子结构的要求，如：These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Lead to已经是谓语动词了，后面再出现will happen就是错误的，要知道后一个动词需要采取去动词性质处理：This will lead to new ideas from different perspectives happening 其实这句话也很罗嗦，完全可以改成：This will lead to a wider variety of ideas.

　　另外一句： Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. 更是无法理解了， is, display, have 及accept 统统是动词形态在句子中出现，但又没有从句将这些动词分开，最终连成功解密过无数学生天书的我也不能理解他究竟想讲什么了。

　　不幸的是在中国庞大的考鸭军团中，有1/2以上的考鸭们写出来的英语句子与这位考生写的同样晦涩难懂。如果你的英语句子也存在这样的基本语法错误的话，我的建议是赶紧花上3-4天的时间解决这个问题，然后再move on到雅思写作上。

　　写作建议：Write in an English way, and make your examiner smile J

　　按照英文的语法句式写英文句子。

　　其次，这篇文章的论证逻辑混乱：第二段他想表达的是招同样数量的男女生的好处，第三段要写专业的不同会导致招收同样数量的男女生是不现实的，最后收尾段写道：最终我同意应该招收同样数量的男女生。从上面的两段看下来，最后一段要写的应该是partially agree with the topic 才对—如果专业有较强的性别取向性，那么该topic不成立;如果专业对于两性来说同样的，那么一半对一半的搭配是值得推荐的。

　　写作建议NO.2: Have your conclusion based on what you have expressed rather than what you have conceived.

　　积累词汇和阅读范文对雅思写作的都有很大的帮助，老师建议大家在平时勤加练习，多阅读多思考，不要到考试了，才知道“书到用时方知少”，最后祝愿所有考生考试顺利。

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