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　　雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛，与雅思考试中的其他几项做比较，写作要考察我们的能力比较多，包括语言构架能力，整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇，还要多看范文，多和范文做比较，找出自己的不足，及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。

　　Putting criminals into prison is not effective in dealing the problem. Education and job training should be offered to them. Do you agree or disagree?

　　处理犯罪问题，是直接关进监狱还是进行教育，你是同意还是不同意呢?

　　How to punish the criminal is an issue of discussion when governments try to find an effective measure to control crime rate. Although many think that providing education and job training is better than jail. In my mind, sending criminals to prison is a wise decision.

　　Opponents of jail claim that changing the criminals’ thought and teaching them a practical survival skill are effective ways to reform offenders. However, there is no research and data to prove this way availability. Despite the fact that most of criminals did not accept education or gained the low level education, much cases shows that those who had accepted the advanced education, even experts and teachers, still broken the law.

　　Opponents also maintain that most of criminals commit a crime due to some certain situations they have to do or action on impulse, so public should provide a more lenient way by education. Nevertheless, such an argument completely ignores the fact that those who are committing a crime possibly consider that jail means training rather than severe punishment if offenders were educated as punishments. Those potential criminals and publics would likely disregard law.

　　Indeed, some people say that the criminals maybe have a profession by job training in cell after released, and they maybe would not revert to crime for basic supporting. While if every criminal accept education and job training, it give rise to a large amount of money and teaching resources government have to pay.

　　In my view, government should harshly punish criminals, which could deter to those have criminal tendency and give publics a sense of security. More importantly, as for victims, they can get a great spiritual consolation. The reason why government do not reform the law is to make sure the law rationality, fairness and effectiveness and consider this problem from different angles.

　　积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法，但同学们要在老师的指导下循序渐进的，我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子，过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。

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