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　　雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛，与雅思考试中的其他几项做比较，写作要考察我们的能力比较多，包括语言构架能力，整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇，还要多看范文，多和范文做比较，找出自己的不足，及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。

　　It is reported that average families' expenditure on education is increasing.

　　Yet how to educate children in a right way always obsessively bothers us. A

　　practice has been suggested that students should spend one year working or traveling to gain practical experiences before taking tertiary education. topic sentence 1 (14 words)There are some advantages to taking one year to work or

　　travel after high-school education.

　　Supporting sentences: (85 words)

　　In general, high-school graduates are less than 20 years old without professional

　　knowledge. When they take their places in society, only the low-paid or laborious

　　job offers are available. After one year of hardships and humiliations,

　　their desire for being equipped with specialized knowledge would inevitably grow

　　greater, turning into powerful force to drive them on cherishing their further

　　education. Next, travel can enlarge one's vision, and students can apply what they

　　have seen or heard into their college curriculums/subjects, helping them better

　　understand theoretical knowledge.

　　BODY2(topic sentence2 (16 words)

　　On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to working or traveling before going

　　to university

　　Supporting sentences( 102words)

　　First, high-school graduates are too young to distinguish the good from the bad. It

　　is common that Generation Y likes hanging out with friends; they move from one

　　group to another and their friendships change over a period of a few weeks or months.

　　Therefore, in society the probability of getting involved with evildoers is pretty

　　high. It is said that the young are easy to become illegal drugs takers if misleading

　　guidance is conducted. Second, to travel for one year is too expensive for people

　　from all walks of life, not to mention that students' financial sources are chiefly

　　from their parents.

　　(**additional point: Besides, one-year travel means you have to be on a move for a

　　long period from one city to another, even from one nation to another. Eventually

　　you may not be able to calm down to concentrate on your studies after the journey.**)

　　Conclusion 2 (62 words)

　　In conclusion, advantages of working or traveling for a long time before further education are obvious but not doable. In my opinion, to work at a very young age might result a hazardous social life and to travel for one year will increase financial burden to the family, hence to educate children in a row can mould them into sensible human resources.

　　积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法，但同学们要在老师的指导下循序渐进的，我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子，过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。

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