2012/09/0503:40关键词:雅思培训小讲堂:写作范文(5)
雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛,与雅思培训中的其他几项做比较,写作要考察我们的能力比较多,包括语言构架能力,整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇,还要多看范文,多和范文做比较,找出自己的不足,及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。
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Rewards can be more effective than punishments when it comes to disciplining pre-adolescent children. A punishment might stop a kid's bad behavior for only a while, but a reward can do more to achieve long-lasting results. For mothers and fathers alike, it is advisable to spare the rod and yet without spoiling the child.
When children behave well, they are often expecting loud praises. On occasions when they do something wrong, they probably do not mind being scolded, if done softly. Because the parent-child relationship is characterized by unconditional love, it is better to bind love with gentleness and not with fear. In a positive sense, a good reward is like a bridge leading to good behavior. On the contrary, a harsh punishment may, more often than not, hurt a child psychologically as well as physically. While it is always necessary for parents to teach a child to distinguish between right and wrong, the choice of a reward usually can work better than that of a punishment, love being the same--far from spoiling.
At a glance, there seems some logic about punishing children in case of breaking normal rules of conduct, but actually there is not. According to this viewpoint, discipline as guidance is a symbol of love, so there is no such thing as being too tough with a child. And that is probably why some parents still insist on strict discipline in the hope that children could thereby distinguish desirable from undesirable behaviors. Such concept is of course understandable; however, these out-of-date parenting techniques are nothing but short-term and desperate survival strategies trying to deal with the here and now. Using punishment to manipulate and control a child anytime might get instant obedience, but not for long. At the end of the day, only a timely reward is the ultimate incentive for a child to behave better.
Rewards rather than punishments would be paying off in child discipline as it is doubtful whether misbehavior and punishment could cancel each other or reinforce each other. In modern society, any thought about the return of the old-fashioned rod to train a child is likely to be regarded as out of place. Ironically, these days some parents are no longer commanders of the family, and this can be seen in the way they obey their children, with apparent pleasure.
积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法,但同学们要在雅思培训老师的指导下循序渐进的,我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子,过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。
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