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　　雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛，与雅思培训中的其他几项做比较，写作要考察我们的能力比较多，包括语言构架能力，整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇，还要多看范文，多和范文做比较，找出自己的不足，及时改正。下面北京新航道学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Public money should be spent on promoting healthy lifestyle rather than on treating illness." Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

　　While treating illness incurs high treatment costs, maintaining wellness is usually much more cost-effective. An investment strategy to promote people's healthy lifestyle could not only decrease public funding on hospitals but also increase the country's overall productivity. It goes without arguing that staying healthy is just as important as treating illness, so the issue is how to change unhealthy habits, at both national and personal levels.

　　If the government's business is business, then it certainly makes business sense to spend money in building a healthy culture, if only to reduce health care costs. It is proper to say that focusing on keeping people healthy is keeping them productive. One of the lessons that the recent economic downhill has taught us is the importance of a healthy workforce in getting ahead with the global competition. The government ought to make people aware that they could not reach their potential without looking after their health; nor could organizations reach their potential without a healthy workforce. But awareness alone is not enough to change behavior and achieve the desired health outcomes. For people to succeed in behavior change, they need a new environment, created with public money, that reinforces their self-motivation.

　　At the personal level, one health problem today is apparently lack of activity as many individuals actually do not do exercise at all. No less obvious is the problem of obesity which causes a variety of illness, including heart attack. In view of this phenomenon, the government should do what money can buy, like campaigns for eating well and going active. Even though people's bad habits die hard, any small progress in a positive way could make a difference in changing personal behaviors. The truth is that movement is movement, and even moderate activities like walking in the park funded by the government could reduce stress and anxiety related to obesity. Simply put, the government had better plan a generous budget to promote public wellness and not to allow matters to get worse, invariably treating illness while losing valuable productivity.

　　All things being considered, keeping a healthy lifestyle is a personal as well as a national issue that deserves public funding, as does treating illness. To upgrade the general health quality, thereby boosting economic productivity, is the right policy that could pay off gradually. In the end, the health debate is not one of either/or because neither could be a waste of public money.

　　积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法，但同学们要在雅思培训老师的指导下循序渐进的，我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子，过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。

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