2012/09/1910:39关键词:雅思写作:文章鉴赏(七)
雅思写作对本来不太擅长语法逻辑的大陆考生来说是取得的一大门槛,与雅思培训中的其他几项做比较,写作要考察我们的能力比较多,包括语言构架能力,整体逻辑能力等;想要得着实不易。那怎么才能在诸多不利因素下自己呢?除了多积累词汇,还要多看范文,多和范文做比较,找出自己的不足,及时改正。下面新航道北京学校的雅思老师就为大家介绍一些雅思写作方面的材料和大家一起交流学习。
范文三:
With the development of society, there are more and more problems brought to our attention, one of which is that wild animals have no place to survive in the 21st century. Some people think that the protection is a waste of resource. From my point of view, I disagree with this statement for some reasons below.
Firstly, the animals and human beings are creatures created by God. Although as Darwin said, “ Survival is the fittest.” we are human beings who have thought. We can’t behave like barbarians and destroy the environment where animals live. We need places to survive and so do animals. Therefore, we ought to give them a wonderful and natural place to survive.
Secondly, there are a lot of species of animals on the earth. They are just like our neighbor. For example, in my childhood, I went to my grandparents’ home in the countryside every weekend. Not far away from the house, there is a forest. Sometimes, I go there with my cousins and brothers. We met a lot of little wild animals there such as, monkeys, snakes, rabbits and so on. 获取雅思写作资料请点击:https://beijing.newchannel.org/ielts/
However, there are a lot of people who may agree and have their own opinion concerning this case. From my angle, we, human beings, can’t deprive the survival rights of animals. On the contrary, we have to protect them from extinction. Just imagine how horrible the world would be if human is the only creature in the world. Hence, the government should educate people to preserve and protect our neighbor, natural wild animals.
范文四:
Nowhere in the world has the issue of animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays more and more meat was provided for people, therefore many people think that animals are being killed just for food, and this kind of action is cruel for animals. The above point is absolutely true; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn’t be divided with that animals were hunted and killed cruelly. It is unfair to animals whose existent right was only exchanged with people’s food.
Another reason is that if people do not eat meat, their health will not be affected. The tenet of Chinese Buddhism forbids monks to kill any animals and eat them. Moreover the Chinese Kongfu comes from the Chinese temple that is famous in the world. The Chinese monks’ healthy physique proves that cookbooks do not need have meat. 获取雅思写作资料请点击:https://beijing.newchannel.org/ielts/
Last but not the least reason is that people have already made all kinds of man-made meat, so they do not have to eat animal meat. Man-made meat contains enough nutrition for healthy people, but it taste isn’t better than animal’s meat. At least, we do not have to kill animals in order to satisfy our appetite.
In conclusion, the important thing is to stop killing animals before it’s too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
积累词汇和写作范文无疑是雅思写作的两个关键方法,但同学们要在雅思培训老师的指导下循序渐进的,我们要知道没有一口吃出的胖子,过于求成的心态反而会让我们得不偿失。祝愿大家都能取得满意的成绩。
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