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发布时间:2020-06-16 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要:应对:It is better for people to be unemployed than to be employed in a job that they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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应对
It is better for people to be unemployed than to be employed in a job that they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这个题目
学生在开头段落写道:
It is a fact that most jobs are undesirable. However, people should not use this reason to be unemployed, which means they should be realistic.
* 这个fact有点吓人。这种论断被说成是事实,不妥。
*“people should not … , which means”这种生硬的非限定性定语从句,不妥。
* which 引导的从句的意义和主句之间的逻辑关系不紧密,读者很可能不明白。“they should be realistic”去应对第 一句话的话,可能在逻辑上更顺畅。
看下面
教师修改意见:
Undesirable as many jobs may be, people should settle for a job before a better one is found.
* 改动较大,但是解决了原句中的所有问题。
* 状语部分是这个句子的重要噱头。这是一个让步状语,形式为:形容词 + as + 主语 + be动词,意思是“虽然什么怎么样”。
* settle for的意思是“将就于”。
* before的用法很巧妙。你品。
小总结:
* 对于定语从句的依赖是坏习惯。
* 有一些连词(小词)用来联系信息之间的关系,效果。
* 看来,还有不少高 级的语法形式和小词的活用可学要学。