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发布时间:2022-12-22 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要:We can access information from the Internet easily. Some people say that libraries are no longer necessary.
We can access information from the Internet easily. Some people say that libraries are no longer necessary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
单主体议论文,同意与否的观点在于:图书馆没必要存在了。
【审题】由于第一句话的背景,整体论述角度覆盖“获取信息”层面。
【思考】科技类大话题有一类出题核心是:有了网络,很多事情可以被取代(学校、博物馆、图书馆、出国旅游等),思考这类题论述时的共通之处。
【段落示范】【立论-图书馆要存在】
1. However, never does this mean that libraries are no longer necessary since they have the functions which the Internet cannot serve.
* 总起句,总写正方合理性,即:网络没有完全覆盖图书馆的功能。
2. To illustrate, the stories written on newspapers, books, and magazines are authentic, since the strict censorship requires authors and editors to be certain about minute details.
* 图书馆优势1:获取信息层面:权威(这句话应该很熟悉,纸媒和网络利弊分析中的常见思路)。
3. By stark contrast, the information shown on the Internet may be fabricated, as some people base their sense of self-worth on the number of ‘likes’ or ‘hearts’.
* 【对比论证】网络在获取信息层面的弊端:虚假信息,因为有些人想哗众取宠。
4. The idle gossip is very likely to mislead the netizens who lack the ability to seek or distinguish authoritative sources.
* 进一步谈弊端带来的结果。
5.Additionally, those who reckon that libraries are no longer needed also mistakenly view them as simple repositories of paper documents, but such facilities can actually offer sound environments for reading and studying.
* 图书馆优势2: 学习氛围(网络没有该作用)
【解析】
1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 ***
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2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 ***
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3. 词汇(Lexical Resource)
authentic,形容词,意思是“权威的”。归类于“话题高频词”。
censorship为不可数名词,意思是“审查机制”。归类于“话题高频词”。
minute为形容词,意思是“细小的”。熟词生用。归类于“话题高频词”。
fabricated 为形容词,意思是“编造的”。归类于“话题高频词”。
self-worth为不可数名词,意思是“自尊;自我价值”。归类于“通用词”。
idle gossip 为不可数名词,意思是“无中生有的小道消息”。归类于“话题高频词”。
repository为可数名词,意思是“仓库”。归类于“通用词”。
4. 语法(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
第1句:主句(否定词提前的部分倒装)+ since 引导的原因状语从句
【部分倒装】雅思写作中常见能用上部分倒装的情况有三种:(1) 否定词提前;(2) not only提前;(3) only if/ when 引导的“只有…才…”结构。这里属于第一种。
e.g. 「常规句」He hardly drinks milk. 「部分倒装」Hardly + does he drink milk.
观察上面这两个句子就能发现:否定词「hardly」提前后,句子剩余部分为:he drinks milk. 再把这句转变成「一般疑问句」即可。
第5句:主句(those view sth. as…)+ but 连词连接转折的独立句(也是这句话想强调的内容)
这句的复杂处在于:穿插了who引导的定语从句;同时也要注意,view有动词的词义:view sth. as… 将…视作…