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支招雅思小作文 | 动态柱 欧洲家庭私家车拥有量

发布时间:2023-08-04 关键词:支招雅思小作文

摘要:[2023/ 7/ 29] The chart below shows the percentage of household with different number of cars in Europe from 1971 to 2001.

 [2023/ 7/ 29] The chart below shows the percentage of household with different number of cars in Europe from 1971 to 2001.

雅思小作文

  【主体段分段】:

  <方法1>:按照时间分段(本篇文章采取此种分段方法)

  <方法2>:按照类别分段

  【开头段】

  The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of cars per household in Europe between 1971 and 2001.

  【概述段】

  It is clear that in the given 3 decades, car ownership increased in Europe. However, the proportion of families with two or more cars remained the smallest throughout the period.

  语言点提示:生活化描述

  思路要点:

  - 除了no car之外,其他两个类别上升→汽车拥有率↑

  - 有多于2辆车的家庭比例一直

  【Body 1】

  We can see that in the initial year, roughly half of the families did not have a car. Although 40% of households had one car, it was uncommon for families to own two or more cars.

  思路要点:年数据对比

  - no car:大约一半

  - one car:40%

  - two or more cars:数值非常低

  【Body 2】

  In the subsequent 30 years, the figure for families with no car was on a constant decline, falling remarkably to 30% in 2001. By contrast, the 30-year period witnessed a gradual growth in the percentage of households with more than one car to 30%. The proportion of one-car families climbed slightly to 45% in 1981, and then it overtook the figure for households without a car. After peaking at 50% in 1991, this figure saw a marginal drop by 10% in the final year.

  思路要点:后续年份

  - no cars:持续下降

  - tow or more cars:逐步上升

  - one car:小幅度上升→1981年超过one car→小幅度

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