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摘要:Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than it was in the past.
Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than it was in the past.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】
Ageing is undeniably associated with challenges. Many elderly people experience worsening health conditions, often as a result of chronic diseases such as high blood pressure and diabetes.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这两个句子分析了变老可能带来的问题:很多老年人会受到慢性疾病的困扰,例如高血压、糖尿病,这些影响到他们的健康状况。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
在本句之后,写作者还可以考虑进一步讨论变老的后果,比如因为慢性疾病的困扰,很多老年人在饮食或者运动方面有诸多禁忌,这些会让老年人觉得自由受限。当然提问的方式是discuss both views,写作者还需要讨论第二个观点,分析哪些方面体现出现在的老年人比过去的老年人生活更好(比如更好的医疗条件,社会福利等)。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“ageing”是名词,表示“变老”。
“undeniably”是副词,表示“不可否认地”。
“be associated with”这一词组表示“和……有关”。
“challenge”是名词,表示“挑战,考验”。
“elderly”是形容词,表示“老年的”。
“chronic”是形容词,表示“慢性的”。
“diabetes”是名词,表示“糖尿病”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
个句子的主语是ageing,后面是系表结构,其中is associated with表示“与……有关”。第二个句子的主语是elderly people,谓语动词是experience,宾语部分是worsening health conditions。逗号后面是介词短语,as a result of后面接宾语chronic disease,随后such as后面进一步举例有哪些具体的慢性疾病。