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发布时间:2023-12-20 关键词:雅思写作
摘要:In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. Men and women should share the housework tasks such as cleaning or childcare equally.
In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. Men and women should share the housework tasks such as cleaning or childcare equally.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【句子示例】
In contrast to the traditional role of women as housewives in the past, a majority of women today are engaged in full-time employment, which significantly reduces the time available for them to manage household chores such as cooking, cleaning, and doing laundry.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子分析了“女性角色”的改变,对应题目的背景“很多女性现在有全职工作”这一现状:她们和过去的“家庭主妇”不同,没有那么多时间可以用来做家务。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
在这个句子之后,写作者可以进一步分析男性参与家务和育儿的好处。例如,可以减轻女性的负担,创造更和谐的家庭氛围。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“in contrast to”这一词组表示“与……不同”。
“majority”是名词,表示“多数”。
“be engaged in”这一词组表示“从事”。
“available”是形容词,表示“可用的,可获得的”。
“chore”是名词,表示“琐事,家务活”。
“do laundry”这一词组表示“洗衣服”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
本句最开始是in contrast to引导的状语部分,逗号后面a majority of women才是句子主干的主语,后面是主干中的谓语be engaged和介词短语in full-time employment。最后是which引导的非限制性定语从句,从句中的谓语是reduce,宾语是time,接着是后置定语available,用来修饰time。最后是for引导的介词短语,进一步解释“时间”会花在哪些具体方面。