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发布时间:2023-12-28 关键词:雅思写作
摘要:As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units.
As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units.
What are the causes?
What effects does it have on society?
【句子示例】
Education empowers individuals to make independent choices and seek opportunities beyond their local communities. Consequently, people may opt to leave their hometowns and form smaller family units or live alone in pursuit of personal and professional growth.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子分析了“教育”和小家庭模式或者独居模式之间的关系。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
在这个句子之后,写作者可以考虑进一步解释,比如有良好教育背景的年轻人倾向于去大城市寻求机会,在大城市他们往往能找到收入更高的工作,与此同时他们也会远离自己的大家庭。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“empower”是动词,表示“使……能够”。
“consequently”是副词,表示“因此”。
“opt to”这一词组表示“选择”。
“pursuit”是名词,表示“追求”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
个句子的主语是education,后面是谓语动词empower,以及宾语individuals,最后是to do动词不定式结构作为状语,“empower individuals to”表示“使个人能够……”。第二个句子的主语是people,谓语是may opt,之后是to do不定式结构,句子的最后是目的状语in pursuit of personal and professional growth。