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摘要:The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
【主体段分段】
Body 1:15-24(始终)、35 and over(始终)
Body 2:其余2个年龄组
【开头段】
The line chart illustrates changes in cinema attendance among 4 age groups who went to the cinema at least once a month in a specific country from 2000 to 2011.
【概述段】
It is clear that the theater attendance experienced an upward trend for all the age groups, and the 15-to-24-year-olds remained to be the dominant group of audience throughout the given period.
思路要点:
- 四个年龄段数据都上升
- 15-24的数据一直
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can find that 15% of people aged 15-24 went to the cinema monthly in the initial year. After a remarkable rise to over 30% in 2004, this figure fluctuated between 35% and 52% for several years, peaking at 58% in 2009. By contrast, the oldest group(35 and over) had the lowest cinema attendance in the 11 years, growing steadily from roughly 2% in 2000 to 12% in 2011.
思路要点:
- <25-24>:2000年15%→到2004年显著上升到30%→随后在35%-52%之间波动→2009年达到峰值58%
- <25 and over>:始终,2%逐步上升到12%
【Body 2】
Similar trends could be found in the figures for the other two groups of people. The proportion of the cinema goers aged 7-14 surged from 10% to roughly 38% in the beginning decade, followed by a significant decline to 30% in the final year. However, only 5% of the 25-to-35-year-old people claimed to visit the cinema every month. Subsequently, this figure underwent some flucturations and increased by almost 7-fold to the highest point in 2009. After a dramatica fall, it finally rose to the same figure as the attendance from the youngest group in 2011.
思路要点:
-<7-14>:2000-2010急剧上升到38%→2011年显著下降到30%
-<25-35>:2000年5%→随后波动,到2009年几乎上升7倍达到值→急剧下降→2011年上升,和7-14交点
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