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发布时间:2024-08-23 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要:Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say the purpose of education is to help people achieve personal ambitions
Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say the purpose of education is to help people achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give our own opinion.
【句子示例】
Education should not be viewed as a dichotomy between serving society and fulfilling personal aspirations; instead, it should be recognized as a dynamic process that can achieve both goals simultaneously.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子分析了教育的目的。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
这个句子可以用于结尾,作为全文的总结,对应的写作者的观点是:教育既需要满足社会需求,也需要帮助个人实现个人目标。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“dichotomy”是名词,表示“一分成二”。
“aspiration”是名词,表示“志向”。
“dynamic”是形容词,表示“动态的”。
“simultaneously”是副词,表示“同时地”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
分号前面的句子的主语是education,谓语是should not be viewed,之后是介词as和之后的宾语部分a dichotomy,句子最后是介词短语between serving society and fulfilling personal aspirations用来修饰前面的名词dichotomy。分号之后是副词instead作为状语,句子的主语是it,指代education,谓语是should be recognized,之后介宾短语as a dynamic process,句子的最后是that引导的定语从句修饰前面的process。
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