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托福写作怎样写出多样化的句子?

发布时间:2022-04-14 关键词:托福写作句子多样性

摘要:托福写作在托福总成绩里占据很大的比重,如果能熟练将写作的句型多样化运用,会很受考官喜欢,得到高分也不在话下。通常来说英文写作单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使作文呆板单调

  托福写作在托福总成绩里占据很大的比重,如果能熟练将写作的句型多样化运用,会很受考官喜欢,得到高分也不在话下。通常来说英文写作单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使作文呆板单调,缺乏生动性和说服力;灵活多变的句子样式和结构则使作文语言生动,自然流畅,丰富多彩。

  一下是新航道小编为大家整理的“写出灵活多变句型”攻略,希望可以帮到大家,具体包括以下几个方面:

托福写作怎样写出多样化的句子?

  长短句变换:简单句、并列句和复合句交替运用

  长句准确生动,长于说明推理;短句简洁明快,意义明确,印象深刻,描述动作,表明主旨,总结归纳,非短句不可。既然各有所长,在写作时应根据实际需要,交替使用简单句、并列句和复合句,以达到“段间长短不一,全篇句式万千”、丰富多样的效果,给读者以及阅卷老师以新鲜感。

  结构多样化:我们学过非谓语动词结构,无动词结构,分隔结构,比较结构,独立结构等。其中最为神通广大的是非谓语动词结构,在句中或作主语、宾语,或作表语、宾语补足语,或作定语修饰名词,或作状语表示条件、原因、让步、时间、方式、目的、结果、伴随状况等,不一而足。

  非谓语动词结构可以简化大部分英语从句,产生语言简练,结构丰富多样的效果,请看下列转化实例:

  名词从句可转化为非谓语动词结构

  1. That John won the marathon surprised us.

  2. John’s winning the Marathon surprised us.

  2. I have not decided whether I should vote for Clint.

  I have not decided whether to vote for Clint.

  定语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构

  1. The man (who is) standing at the gate is my English teacher.

  2. The car (that was) repaired yesterday by him is my mother’s.

  3. The next train that arrives is from New York.

  状语从句可转化为非谓语动词结构

  1. After he had watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.

  Having watered the garden, he began to mow the lawn.

  2. When they are heated metals expand.

  (When) Heated, metals expand.

托福写作怎样写出多样化的句子?

无动词结构

  无动词结构也是阅卷老师喜欢看到的亮点,原因就在于由于汉语写作惯性,中国学生很少能想到使用该结构。往往放在句子开头,以逗号同主句隔开,表示原因、条件、让步、补充说明,伴随状况等意义。请看下列例子:

  形容词无动词结构

  1. Big and fat, Victor went to the Gym(健身馆) every Sunday morning.(原因)

  2. Speechless, Henry nodded and sat on a folding seat.(伴随状语)

  3. Anxious for a quick decision, the chairman called for a vote.(原因)

  4. (Although)always helpful, he was not much liked by people.(让步)

  5. It has little taste, unless hot.(条件)

  名词无动词结构

  6. A fellow Georgian(佐治亚人), Jordan was well-known as a friend of the President.(同位语)

  7. Bank loan or no bank loan, we’ll buy the house.(让步)

  8. Whatever the reason, his cordiality(诚恳)to her has won him a friend.(让步)

  介词无动词结构

  9. Because of his mistake several people died.(原因)

  10. Without his sister’s money, Harry would never be a doctor.(条件)

  相比之下不难发现,无动词结构比分句效果更好,更地道,更简练,同时又丰富了作文的句子结构,不仅让读者和阅卷老师为之眼前一亮!

  主语多样化:中国人习惯于用人称主语,而英语中则常用无灵主语,(inanimate subject),即无生命的事物作主语,如:

  1.The last two decades has witnessed earth-shaking changes in China.

  中国在过去的二十年中发生了翻天覆地的变化。

  2 A strange peace came over her when she was alone.

  她独处时感到一种特别的安宁。

  3 I am very sorry that the pressure of other occupations has prevented me from sending an earlier reply to your letter.

  由于我近来事务繁忙,没能给于及早回复,对此我表示深深的歉意。  

  掌握了上述新航道小编带来的方法将会让你的托福作文大放异彩,拿下理想的托福分数就不难了。申请到心仪的offer也不再是梦想。

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