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Question

Your professor is teaching a class on society. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response, you should do the following:

-Express and support your opinion.

-Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

Doctor Achebe

Let’s think about population trends in urban and rural areas (villages). Living in urban areas can be expensive; nonetheless, when they have a choice of where to live, people in some countries do not wish to live in rural areas even if the cost of living there is lower. If governments of some countries want to attract more people to live in rural areas or villages, what is the best strategy or approach that governments can use? Why?

Claire

I would live in a rural area if the government gave more financial help to farmers. Although it may cost very little to live in a rural area, it costs a lot to begin a career in agriculture. If I had financial help, I would start my own farm and be happy to live in a rural area.

Kelly

In my country, urban centers are great places to live because you can access shops, restaurants, and museums. If the government of my country wanted to attract me to live in a rural area, the area would first have to attract more businesses focused on entertainment and culture than most rural areas have now.

范文正文

I believe the best way to lure more people to live in rural regions is by providing better internet access. Regarding Kelly’s viewpoint, if people desire the convenience of services found in cities—such as shops, restaurants, and museums—then they should remain in urban areas.【条件状语从句】 The appeal of living in the countryside lies in its seclusion, not its convenience. However, individuals residing in villages still need to make a living, and this is where improved internet access becomes essential.【表语从句】Young people can choose to become digital nomads, allowing them to enjoy the tranquility of the countryside while working remotely as online teachers, translators, software programmers, and more. They may also sell local specialties through online live streaming, fueling the region’s economy. Elderly residents can breathe fresh air and appreciate the beautiful rural scenery without worrying about health issues, as they can access telehealth services. All the aforementioned can be achieved if the government provides more accessible and affordable broadband connectivity. In this way, the problem of rural depopulation can be addressed.

写作思路和特色

本题源于ETS在2023年公布的样题1中，又在2023年12月16日、2025年6月14日的学术讨论中重复出现，属于考察频率较高的题目。教授问两个学生，政府可以采取什么办法来吸引更多人到农村居住？Claire认为政府应该为农民提供更多经济援助，这样有利于人们创办农场；而Kelly认为应该在农村开设更多娱乐和文化设施，让农村更便利。

本文的观点是，政府应该为农村地区提供更稳定可靠的互联网，以此吸引更多人到农村居住。文章采用了“总论点+反驳+解释+举例+总结”的结构。提出总论点后，先反驳了Kelly的看法，认为农村需要保留自身幽静的特色，而不是把自己变得像城市一样方便。接着，文章指出生活在农村的人也需要谋生，因此应该改善当地的互联网设施。文章从不同年龄段的人的角度举例，说明年轻人可以通过互联网成为数字游民；还可以直播带货，售卖当地特色农产品。年长的人也可以一边享受农村的优美景色和清新空气，同时也不需要担心出现健康问题怎么办，因为他们可以使用互联网上的远程医疗。如果政府能提供更便捷且便宜的网络，上述所有目标均有望实现。如此一来，乡村人口减少的问题便能得到解决，人们更有可能来农村居住。

用词用语整理

【条件状语从句】

Regarding Kelly’s viewpoint, if people desire the convenience of services found in cities—such as shops, restaurants, and museums—then they should remain in urban areas.

这句话的作用是反驳题目中Kelly的观点。句子先用Regarding Kelly’s viewpoint开头，点明这句话的观点来自题目。接下来使用条件状语从句指出，如果人们希望在农村享受到城市的便利，那他们应该直接住在城市，而不是农村。也就是说，如果农村像城市一样有着丰富的业态，那么农村也就变成了城市，失去了自己的特色。这一句话包含了多层信息：观点来源（Regarding...）、条件假设（if...）、具体举例（破折号部分）、结论（then...），避免了多个短句的堆砌，使文章更紧凑、更有深度。

【表语从句】

However, individuals residing in villages still need to make a living, and this is where improved internet access becomes essential.

这句话起到承上启下的作用。前文论述的是农村需要保持自身的特色，即安静、免受打扰，但生活在农村的人也并不是真的“与世隔绝”，他们也需要谋生。这样就引出了本文的观点“要想吸引人来农村生活，就要提供更好的网络”，便于展开后文的解释和举例。

“问题+this is where sth becomes essential / necessary”这一句式在托福学术讨论写作中可以用来引出解决方案，非常值得掌握。

例如下列句子仿写：

1. Many young people struggle to f ind jobs in their hometowns, and this is where government support becomes essential. 
许多年轻人在家乡难以找到工作，而正是这一点使得政府支持变得至关重要。

2. Traditional industries are facing fierce competition from online platforms, and this is where innovation becomes necessary. 
传统行业正面临来自在线平台的激烈竞争，而正是这一点使得创新成为必要。

【用词用句整理】

lure v. 引诱，吸引

Supermarket chains try to lure customers with price discounts.连锁超市试图用打折来吸引顾客。

appeal n. 吸引力，魅力

This used to be a marvelous hotel but it has lost its appeal in recent years.这家旅馆曾经非常好，可是近年来却失去了吸引力。

seclusion n. 与世隔绝

He’s been living in seclusion since he retired from acting.自从他退出演艺圈以来，一直过着隐居的生活。

digital nomad n. 数字游民（借助互联网远程办公，在自己喜欢的地方生活和旅行的人群）

tranquility n. 平静，宁静祥和

I love the tranquility of the countryside.我喜欢乡村的恬静。

online live streaming n. 线上直播

fuel v. 加强，激起

The president’s speech fueled speculation that she is about to resign.总统的讲话引起了人们认为她准备辞职的猜测。

depopulation n. 人口减少

Closure of rural schools will accelerate depopulation.关闭农村学校将加速人口衰减。

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