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发布时间:2024-12-16 关键词:雅思写作知识点
摘要:In many countries, students who leave high school have no understanding of how to manage their money.
In many countries, students who leave high school have no understanding of how to manage their money.
Why is this the case?
What can be done to improve students' understanding of how to manage personal finance?
【句子示例】
Schools often prioritize academic subjects over practical life skills, rendering students inadequately prepared to manage essential financial tasks such as budgeting, managing debt, and investing.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子分析了学校强调学术学习,但忽略学生的生活技能的培养会产生什么影响。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
这个句子可以作为题目个问题的其中一个分论点。对于两个问题的设问形式,写作者还需要回答“如何提升学生理财能力”这一问题。如果从学校层面回答,可以考虑提出“开设理财课程”的解决方案。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“prioritize”是动词,表示“优先考虑”。
“render”是动词,表示“致使”。
“inadequately”是副词,表示“不充分地”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
本句的主语是schools,谓语动词是prioritize,宾语是academic subjects,后接介词短语over practical life skills。后面的rendering是现在分词,表示结果。prepared是后置定语,修饰students。句子最后是动词不定式to manage essential financial tasks,such as后列举了具体的理财技能。
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